The Jesseble

Hey there and welcome! This is a wonderful poem. I enjoyed reading it with its refreshing rhymes and concise language. A good poem is one that keeps the reader engaged ...

Name: Elliot (Ellie) Harris Age: 33 Appearance (written description): Nothing about Ellie’s appearance suggests anything extraordinary. Her hair is blonde, naturally highlighted – suggesting that

This is a good poem, but considering how you posted that it’s something you feel strongly about, I guess that you would want some constructive critiquing. If you don't, then ...

Alana De Marvoir Crouching low on the edge of the rooftop, Alana remained as still as a gargoyle, her icy blue eyes absorbing the speckled lights of the city. She ...

Hey everyone. I thought I'll drop in a nice evil character for you all...although I suspect she'll be dying :( oh well...occupational hazard of being a villian I guess *shrugs* ...

Hi :) While this is a long poem, it's hardly long enough to put an avid reader off especially as this poem is both brilliant and intriguing. The concise descriptions ...

It claws beneath my eyes, Fear builds from a single flicker, That was benign at first. Experiences trigger the first response, Which twitch and throb, Discordant against the familiar thud ...

Great poem. Very chilling indeed and enjoyable! The rhythm is a bit fragmented and irregular at times but it works along with the irregular rhyme...I quite like that because it ...

Hallo Hmm...inspired by the Romantic poets methinks ;) I've read it through a few times and each time, the second line jars. I don't think that the enjambement works there, ...

In previous years, I've planned in advance like crazy...only to fall flat on my face when the time came. I seem to decide half way through that I hate the ...

Whoa, this is odd. YWS looks funky! I've been gone for a while... :D For those who don't remember me, I'm 'The Jesseble' or Jess. I should be around here ...

Hello! I haven't been on YWS for at least a year! *GASP* I've decided to return now things have smoothed over...but now I'm panicking about my exams in January...AHHHH! Well...anyway...it's ...

Trudi Canavan is definately one of those authors that can get away with creating a completely new world without being too cliche *cough* unlike Paulini *cough* The Black Magician trilogy ...

There was this teen fic that I read was really good and reminded me of the quick paced thrillers that Alan Gibbons is famous for. Its been bugging me for ...

Granted, but rather than cutting yourself, you missed and slashed the computer - which blew up and that caused a random power surge, knocking out the grid. Within the confusion, ...